Editing Surrender at Sea. Trying to spice it up and bring it to life. Do any of you ever struggle with making a scene hot without crossing to trashy? I would love to hear your thoughts.
I add an emotional connection between the two characters. It's too easy to make a scene trashy when it's erotic romance, so you have to delve into your characters' psyche and show WHY they are there. It's not just for the physical gratification, it's something more they seek--a union of the soul.
I add an emotional connection between the two characters. It's too easy to make a scene trashy when it's erotic romance, so you have to delve into your characters' psyche and show WHY they are there. It's not just for the physical gratification, it's something more they seek--a union of the soul.
ReplyDeleteI need a sex scene with romance, otherwise it's just pr0n. I like to see some romance as well as a forceful but tender hero. Good luck, Becca!
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